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    April 27

    Those who can't...borrow!

    Well I do believe that I find myself sitting at the computer and actually conversing with myself...Please help me get something together: a thought, an idea, even a fleeting thought!  Ii'll try and grasp it before it's completely gone....But alas its just not happening. Boo Hoo Hoo... But wait ...if I can't think of something of my own then I think this Mom is going to give everyone a treat and let you enjoy a poem my daughter wrote  June 13th 1995 while she was station in Korea.....
                                                                                                                              
    Naturally
     
    Can i muster up the strength
    and stand on common ground
    Make way for inhibitions,oh
    Can they come around?
     
    May i turn a little light on
    Its  slightly dark in here
    Did i really bring  that with me
    Is it only just my fears?
     
    Let me  light this candle-
    you can look into my eyes
    past my heart and to my soul
    I swear it never lies
     
    Enter slowly my house of glass
    Be careful where you step
    On the floor, left is hurt
    from the last man i had met
     
    Stop! Back up! Go quickly!
    This wall must stay in place
    Can you see, as you turn around
    the panic in my face?
     
    Time to go, I'm sorry
    This was'nt meant to be
    Go search for your contentment
    and accept this gift from me.
     
    Well I hope you enjoyed that. I just love it, and yes I do have more and not only from Elizabeth ...my daughter Reece has written a few also... not one but two talented daughters!

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    Very nice poem......how wonderful to have children that insightful.
    I'm still reading your blogs! :-)
     
    Colleen
    June 15
    Kadrinwrote:
    Hi, First time here by way of Mikeys site. My best buddy is Scottish so I sent her a link to it. Nice site, nice to meet ya, hugs Blabby
    June 4
    I hope you had a wonderful Mother's Day :)
     
    May 14
    Alba Bwrote:
    They are truly gifted!  I know you are proud!!!  I hope you have a wonderful Mother's Day!
    May 13
    That's great, thanks for sharing.  My daughter, who is 4, wrote me what she calls a poem for Mother's Day... actually she dictated it to my mom who wrote it down.  If I remember, I'll post it after my busy day is done.  Take care!
    May 13
    SAAMwrote:
    very nice!!
    Apr. 29

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